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by Certainly Love
  • April 3, 2007
  • Short Story
  • Romantic

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Night Mistress
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Night Mistress commented · Sat May 12, 2007 4:16 pm

it really good. you shoudl put up another piece here soon.

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Crimson
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Crimson wrote a review · Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:10 am

I really, really liked it. I'm curious as to why he wasn't in the state to fall in love with someone.

The only thing I can think of that needs a itty-bitty bit of tweaking is this part....

He's good.


Since you used past tense in the rest of it, I'm pretty sure it should be 'He was good.'

I can't wait to try to find more of your works, I really enjoyed this.



"And the rest is rust and stardust."
— Vladimir Nabokov